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True Grit: Give Me A Different Ending and Some Freakin’ Contractions

True Grit: Give Me A Different Ending and Some Freakin’ Contractions

On Christmas Day, the husband and I took in three movies: True Grit, The Fighter, and Black Swan. Here’s my analysis of the first one…

The Good

First, like many Hollywood westerns, True Grit boasts grand cinematography. Although barren deserts, leafless forests, and muddy streams don’t sound particularly majestic, they can be — especially when framed by someone who understands the significance of land/landscape to the American western. After all, in this genre the scenery often surfaces as a character itself as well as an extension of the western hero/cowboy; it is both the terrestrial progenitor from which he (and occasionally she) is brought forth and that which he ultimately seeks to tame.

Fortunately, the Coen brothers know this. Lovingly, they frame the land and the (human) characters. Extreme long shots like the first three below position the main players and their bodies as small and insignificant amid the Body of the West, mere specks of dust that must work doubly hard to tame this vast unruly force of nature. Yet in the last two shots, the characters appear at one with the scenery, the costumes, background, lighting complementing one another naturally. Either way, the viewer of True Grit can tell that the characters both fall and rise up from their surroundings, which in turn, make them what they are:

  • gritty and washed-up (Jeff Bridges’s Ruben “Rooster” Cogburn)
  • hopeful and braggadocios (Matt Damon’s Mr. LeBoeuf)
  • fearless and determined (Hallie Steinfeld’s Mattie Ross)

As a result, I agree with Roger Ebert’s review of Roger Deakins’s cinematography: it “reminds us of the glory that was, and can still be, the Western.” (More fantastic screenshots like the ones below may be found at the True Grit Wiki.)

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The second element of True Grit I appreciate is the somber nondiegetic music that opens and closes the film and is softly peppered throughout, a leisurely-paced instrumental version of the nineteenth-century hymn “Leaning on the Everlasting Arms.”

hailee true grit1 True Grit: Give Me A Different Ending and Some Freakin’ ContractionsThough they claim True Grit is too violent for kids, several Christian review sites are recommending the film not only because of the message of this hymn (e.g., both we and Mattie rest on God’s everlasting arms), but also because of the opening title card, which features Proverbs 28:1 (“The wicked run away when no one is chasing them”), and Mattie’s voiceovers, which reference prayers and “the grace of God.” One site even claims that True Grit is one of those rare Hollywood movies that “doesn’t back down from Christianity, keeping in step with the faith foundation many early Americans had in that time” (CBN).

While I can appreciate this reading, it is not completely accurate; the film focuses much more on violence, death, kidnapping, murder, and vengeance than faith, God, or nineteenth-century Christian values. Additionally, these characters do not rely on faith or religion to survive or attain their goals, but on themselves, the landscape, and each other. Still, the incorporation and repetition of this sobering version of “Leaning on the Everlasting Arms” is powerful and sets the tone. (More on the hymns and music in True Grit here.)

The Problematic

With that said, at least four elements of True Grit bother me enough to grade it with a slightly above average score (C+):

TrueGrit Steinfeld Bridges True Grit: Give Me A Different Ending and Some Freakin’ ContractionsFirst, at times, I can see Jeff Bridges and Hallie Steinfeld acting. I’m not 100% sure how to describe this, but what I mean is that the actors do not seem fully invested in certain scenes, most of which take place at the beginning of the film, e.g., when Cogburn is on the courtroom stand, when Mattie approaches Cogburn for the first time (face to face, not outside the out-house), and when Cogburn (drunk and in pajamas) finally agrees to take on Mattie’s request to find her father’s killer, Tom Chaney. In these scenes, Bridges’s and Steinfeld’s eyes do not seem truly focused on what’s or who’s before them, and their bodies appear tight and awkward when they speak and react; they’re not nearly as natural as they are in the middle and end of the film. In any event, all of this is distracting and takes me out of the diegesis.

830px Trailer1 15 500x208 True Grit: Give Me A Different Ending and Some Freakin’ ContractionsSecond, the characters annoyingly avoid contractions. After I complained about this on Twitter, a couple of friends responded that Charles Portis’s book (from which this film is apparently very faithfully adapted) doesn’t employ contractions either. In fact, a reviewer from The Daily Beast praises True Grit (both film and book) because it is “written in that vernacular, the speech of people who, while they may have been illiterate, were raised on readings of Shakespeare and the King James Bible, an English practically devoid of contractions and Latinate words.” Okay, perhaps these are historically accurate representations of “the rhythms and cadences of late-19th century Southern speech,” and maybe they work on the page. But onscreen, phrases like I do not and I cannot and She will not sound stilted and unnatural, especially flowing out of the mouths of southern characters who are habitually known to slur their words.

Third, Bridges’s “Rooster” Cogburn is too gruff. Yes, Cogburn’s supposed to be grizzly, gruff, and crotchety: “The meanest one is Rooster Cogburn,” a man in the film informs Mattie. “He is a pitiless man, double-tough, and fear does not enter into his thinking. He loves to pull a cork.” All of this is fine and perfectly in sync with the genre, etc. However, at the start of the film, Bridges’s voice is too gruff, too grating. Rather than suggesting huskiness and “double-toughness,” it resembles a middle-aged man personifying his chain-smoking grandfather. When he spews his lines, the actor’s throat rattles and sounds an octave too deep — and not in a good way like Johnny Cash or any of the Baldwin brothers.

[Please note: spoiler about the film's ending below.]

Finally, I found myself frustrated by True Grit‘s conventional ending. Before I explain this, I should point out that much of True Grit is unconventional, at least where female characters are concerned. This is one reason I wanted to see the film. For example, normally in westerns, frontierswomen represent “the forces of civilization, embodying the values of family, community, education, domestication, and cultivation that informs the male hero’s transformation of the wilderness into a garden” (Belton 251). In brief, women and girls are relegated, as many were in “real life,” to a secondary status that revolved around domesticity and familial stability. However, in True Grit, Mattie does not fit this bill. While her motives to find Tom Chaney are grounded in family duty and pride, her essence, business sense, hard-headedness, and fearlessness have nothing to do with domestication or civilization. At fourteen, she is independent and active.

If I were teaching right now, I’d ask, “Because Mattie is independent and active, what will likely happen to her?” And my film students would respond: “She will probably be punished.” That’s right; in typical Hollywood fashion, Mattie is punished for her independent and strong-willed ways. Frustration! Throughout the film, I’ve seen Mattie bargain for what she wants, brave the elements, and kill her father’s murderer. And what does she receive in return? A snake bite that causes her to lose an arm and live the remainder of her life as “an old maid.” (Mattie’s also saved in the end by Cogburn and LeBoeuf, another typical fate for independent women.)

1221 ruthmorris life.ART G1G16O61E.1+morris true grit.standalone.prod affiliate.58 500x331 True Grit: Give Me A Different Ending and Some Freakin’ ContractionsMattie’s closing voiceover informs the viewer that she never found love or married because she “just didn’t find the time for it.” On its own, that’s acceptable. Women don’t need to marry; women don’t have to “find the time” for romance if they are off doing other things. But that’s not quite the message from the film (or from Hollywood in general). You see, when onscreen women are scarred, marred, maimed, etc. they are usually no longer viable in the world; they do not fit in and/or are unaccepted (see my post “Stars and Scars” for more).

In the case of True Grit, Mattie’s autonomy in her youth leads her to become a (disfigured) spinster — a term/stereotype that carries with it a social stigma of ugliness (e.g., her amputation removed her potential beauty and marriageability), frumpiness, downtroddenness, and depression. Another term that fits here is steely, which is unfortunately, but expectedly, how several critics describe the adult Mattie at the film’s end.

 

Some Updates

12/27/10: I’ve written a follow-up post “True Grit, Mattie’s Fate, and Testing Onscreen Women.” Please read it before you comment on my thoughts here.

12/28/10: I never intended to spend this much time thinking and writing about True Grit as it wasn’t a film that greatly affected me as I watched it. But since I have lived with, researched, and discussed it with others for the past three days, I admit that I’ve come to appreciate the film more than I did after I exited the theater and subsequently wrote this post. Now, when I consider True Grit in its entirety, I see that what bothered me about it are relatively minor quibbles, some of which are even worked out as the film moves forward (e.g., Bridges eventually stops overacting, and both he and Steinfeld settle into the roles so that they I can’t see them acting anymore). So while I still find the epilogue problematic, I’m changing my grade from a C+ to a somewhere between a B and B+. (Btw, here’s another person who claims that including the epilogue is “not a good idea.”) =)

01/01/11: Somehow my (controversial!) thoughts about the ending of True Grit have become scattered about the Web; therefore, rather than commenting individually to each person/post, I thought I’d locate my responses here. After all, most of the people who disagree with me are debating the same thing — that my reading of the epilogue is too harsh and/or too reliant on film theory or previous onscreen representations of gender.

But here’s what else I’m also noticing: at least 80% of the people who disagree with me about the portrayal of adult Mattie have read the book on which the film is based. And according to those who’ve read Portis’s novel (again, I have not), Mattie grows up to be equally as independent and spunky as she was in the narrative proper; moreover, she apparently not only works at, but also owns and manages the town bank. In other words, her womanhood/personhood is not defined by her marital status, steely demeanor, or severed arm. As one online observer claims, “She was a spunky strong-willed girl who would do whatever it takes to get what she needs. Also, [in her youth] she was a shrewd bargainer and haggler. That would all pay off for her later in life as she becomes a well-to-do bank owner .” Another viewer who’s also read the novel writes, “[Adult] Mattie would sneer at the suggestion that she is ‘physically challenged.’ She is instead ‘a woman with brains and a frank tongue.’ She loves her church and her bank, expresses Scripture and platitudes of Presbyterian piety with black humor, and triumphs as a woman we can all admire.”

But I’m not sure the Coens’s epilogue shows us these attributes in full or at least in enough light that the viewer could read between the lines. Walking staunchly down a dirt road, exhuming a friend’s body, and calling a man who won’t rise in the presence of a woman trash does not necessarily equate to the character these viewers/readers are describing. I’m wondering, then, if my “opponents” are merging their experience/familiarity with the book’s characterization of Mattie and what they’re seeing/hearing onscreen. Similarly, as fellow blogger/Twitterer Craig Kennedy pondered yesterday on Twitter, I wonder if I (having read the book first) might do the same?

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Vince - 21. Mar, 2011 - Reply

I think your thoughts on women and how they are treated in society (especially at the time of the film) may have clouded your judgement of the story.

Firstly, the snake bite was not punishment for being a strong woman, that is absurd. She was 14, not a 25. She had no business out there in the wild, and to be fair, she would have most likely died. Of course she was saved by the two grown men, again she was a small child. Try and keep that in mind, when you re-read what you wrote. You attack the film, for not allowing a strong female character to go unpunished, but to be fair, she was not a woman, she was a girl.

As for the ending, she did not become a spinstress because she was disfigured, she became a spinstress because her father was murdered, she sought retribution, watched rooster kill a dozen men, than she herself murdered a man, than lost her arm. That would kinda have an effect on a 14 year old girl. Also she was incredibly intelligent, outspoken, strong willed, and bull headed, not qualities that would land her a suiter that day and age.

Either way, I agree with much of what you wrote but I can't help feeling that you brought a little too much of your own hangups into the review.

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david - 06. Apr, 2011 - Reply

I just watched true grit in an arthouse cinema last night. Overall I enjoyed the movie quite a bit. However I found several things distracting and distractions are death to a movie.

Bridges starts off with almost the voice of death…extremely deep, southern, old, and hoarse but quite intelligible. Through the course of the film, his voice varies from the start throughvarying stages of classic Bridges, unintelligible, high pitch yelps, and so-on. If you are old and gruff, you are old and gruff…you don't start talking like a young man all of a sudden. I had no idea how old he was or was supposed to be, but at least I thought we knew what his voice sounded like from the start, but that changed as much as Maddi's lipgloss.

Damon was playing a peculiar character. Indignant, dumb, heroic, etc. Again character inconsistencies are BAD. It's OK to have a varied character, but if you are dumb, stay dumb, don't get insightful on occasion, unless it is like rainman, when you don't realize you are being insightful.

Brolin was another bizarre character…acting exceptionally stupid, and apparently impervious to gunshots (since he barely flinched upon being shot and no one seemed to take any interest in tending to the (obviously major) wound. Some mention of it merely breaking a rib was mentioned, but how does someone who was just shot become his own diagnosing physician? He was a very ineffectual person as well and having him as the target of their huge manhunt seemed unlikely. Was he just petulant with a gun in his hand i.e. don't piss me off or I'll get mad and shoot you like a child?

The ending was almost unwatchable. Starting off with the ridiculous horse chase all night, and then somehow deciding that it was so important to shoot the horse when the horse could have just as easily rested for a while, gotten a drink and wandered off (at least give it a broken leg!)…that whole sequence of riding and shooting and then running (Was he training for a triathlon recently?) was completely disconnected from both reality and the rest of the film. Seriously, a 60 year old man jogging for miles with a huge 14 year old in your arms? WTF?

Maddi was the only consistent character in the movie, and she was pretty tremendous. Props to her.

The language was bizarre and not really believable…the lack of contractions as mentioned by others just seemed like some writer's affectation or desire to be 'different'. Again, a bad choice and another distraction from the story.

Overall I enjoyed it, but the many oddities and idiosyncrasies reduced me to an observer instead of a participant, but I'd still give it a B+/A-.

David

Apple - 17. Jun, 2011 - Reply

I looked up the lack of contractions in True Grit to see if it was a stylization element frequently applied to movies set in older times, or was from the novel, or was a Coen Bros. thing. To my surprise, a lot of people seem upset about this element. No, it's not an accurate portrayal of the times, and hardly anyone speaks that way. Still, why are people so annoyed by it? Although I noticed it, and went hunting for informatino about why, I actually quite enjoyed the effect. It added texture to the dialog. Due to the fact that contractions are not to be used in formal writing–but are used everywhere else–it codes as formal and serious. You would think this would stunt the dialog, but I found it actually added a deadpan effect to the humorous lines and a Word-of-God seriousness to the serious parts. It was enjoyable.

Also, if you aren't Southern, you shouldn't advocate for the continue portrayal of all Southerners as being people who can do not but slur. Yes, the Southern dialect employs some unique linguistic elements, but I doubt they use any more contractions than other spoken English dialects, and twang is not "slur".

Harumph - 17. Jun, 2011 - Reply

This review honestly seems written by an out of touch old lady.

Kelli - 18. Jun, 2011 - Reply

Nah, not out of touch by any means. It's just written by someone who analyzes films for a living. =)

I'd encourage you to check out my follow-up post to this one, if you haven't already as it explains things a bit further, including why I ultimately rate the film a B/B+ (rather than my initial grade of C+): True Grit, Mattie's Fate, and Testing Onscreen Women. Thanks for reading.

tom - 01. Jul, 2011 - Reply

The ending was entirely pointless and ruined the whole movie, why on Earth they decided to tack it on there i do not know. It was incongruent and made the heroine look like a bitter dried up hatchet faced bitch instead of the feisty intelligent woman we came to expect.

michelle maesouza - 22. Apr, 2012 - Reply

I’m waaaayy late to this party. i just watched the movie for the first time yesterday. I’d have to say Mattie is as intimidating as a woman as she was as a child. All i can really think of is: Well behaved women rarely make history.

She’s a spitfire. Most women like her, aren’t married, because she’s not needy and doesn’t need to be taken care of. She’s wealthy and educated and that’s what is different about our generations as compared to the ones before. The West hewed out the smartest, heartiest most productive generations in our country’s history. Pioneer women were stronger and brighter than most women even today. It’s no big deal that she didn’t have a family. She’s not very maternal, she’s just not cut from that cloth. The language didn’t bother me. it was spot on, that’s how people talked back then. It’s real English. What’s unnatural is the muttering, slang riddled ghetto speak that passes for English these days. I prefer people that can express themselves and what they mean. Americans drive other English speakers nuts. Apparently we do the verbal equivalent of shuffling, or dragging our feet…

Chandler Swain - 30. Jul, 2012 - Reply

I think your initial grading of the film is highly apropos. The problems you find in the film are also inherent in Portis’ novel, which as a piece of casual Americana is a pleasant read, but highly overrated. The lack of contractions didn’t bother me in the novel or the first filmed version but became problematic in the Coen version, a problem I feel directly caused by the often sketchy performances. Rather than being a celebration of Christianity, in the novel Mattie’s piety is actually a part of the novel’s satire, her ferocious narrow mindedness engendering all manner of bigotry and derision toward her fellow Man, the stubborn obsessiveness with which she operates merely an unforgiving sanctimony. Her supposed religious devotion is simply a masquerade for a fearsome streak of intemperate mulishness. Since we see and judge the other characters through her eyes, we must also filter our judgments about them and their true character. The ending of the film does not work, nor did it in the novel. First of all, it’s an unnecessary coda that overextends Portis’ intended portrait of Mattie, with the affixed flash forward (in visualized terms, since the entire story is a remembrance)reemphasizing characteristics that may seem precocious in a child but hard and mean spirited in an adult. For all of it’s supposed charms, the story fails to illuminate any influence on Mattie’s character. She was hard and stiff necked as a girl and the same as an adult; a rather depressing conclusion to a story where we might feel there would be some transforming effect upon Mattie, good or bad, experiencing this epic journey. I think your interpretation of Mattie as seen as damaged goods and therefore to the unfair designation of “ugliness” may be correct, but in that’s how other characters might regard her while avoiding the the peril of directly confronting the problem of her obnoxious personality which travels far past a legitimate consdieration of the celebrated strong willed woman and into the territory of the obnoxiously villainous. (Mr. Potter ring a bell?) Call me sentimental in my outlook, but I feel Marguerite Roberts’ adaptation of the novel far superior that to the of the new film, and of Portis’ work. (Those who quibble about fidelity to the novel should take a second look as the Coen’s film takes just as many liberties as the Hathaway version.)

Kelli - 30. Jul, 2012 - Reply

Thanks for the comment, Chandler. Yours is one of the first in a while that’s really made me want to read the novel. :)

Denise Breslin - 26. Aug, 2012 - Reply

Thank you so much for objecting to the very shocking ending of this film. Just saw it via Netflix and was really enthralled UNTIL, UNTIL the bizarre, out of sync ending. I absolutely HATED the ending: it was so bizarre, so jolting and out of place in the context of the rest of the movie. Like a middle finger to the viewer.

Geez, Mattie was spunky as a young girl and bitter as hell as a mature woman. Seems like the beginning and middle rang true, but the ending was a smack in the face — belonged more to Eugene O’Neill’s “Long Day’s Journey into Night” — ya think? I have not read the book and am anxious to see how film #1 with Kim Darby and John Wayne differed from both this second film and the book.

Kelli Marshall - 26. Aug, 2012 - Reply

“Like a middle finger to the viewer.” — Yes, I think that’s an apt comparison. Thanks, Denise. :)

Andretta Francescetini - 26. Dec, 2012 - Reply

The problem with the lack of contractions is that the actors treated the words as throwaway baggage. You can pack a lot of meaning into those tiny words. Instead they tried to recite sentences as if phrases like “can not” were their contraction equivalents. Pausing, emphasis, intonation. They seem like small things but great feeling can hide in subtlety. If you can’t perform those lines in a way that comes off naturally, in a way where those “extra” words are not meaningless filler but emotional punctuation, then just use the contractions and save the audience the pain. These are quality actors, by record, so I have to suspect the directors on this flaw.

I likewise found many instances in the movie where I was unable to suspend my disbelief and only saw acting. Very strange. It was at times like watching a diner cook grill up a burger and drop a basket of taters in the bubbling oil. Other moments, great performances. A strangely inconsistent film.

I appreciate your thoughts on the film and agree with the original review.

Kelli Marshall - 27. Dec, 2012 - Reply

Thanks, Andretta. And now I’m hungry for some “taters.” :)

James K - 17. Apr, 2013 - Reply

Coming from an old southern family, I’d like to add my thoughts on your comments. Some of this is nitpicky, and some comes from viewing the film through the eyes of a southerner (specifically, an East Texan):

While the cinematography in the film is indeed grand, there are no deserts depicted. The season is winter, and bleak, perhaps giving the appearance of desert, but no deserts exist in the part of the south the story is set in. I suspect that many people infer the stereotypical Western-movie desert when seeing the film, but it simply doesn’t appear. I also hesitate to refer to TG as a “western.” The story doesn’t really take place in the west, though it has that flavor, certainly.

The overreacting/stiffness you describe in the initial scenes between Mattie and Rooster is pretty accurate in reality. There is a formal, almost stiff and “actorly” interaction between elder southerners and teens or young adults, particularly if the elder is in a position to possibly grant the younger person something. It’s almost a ritual, and I recognized it in these. scenes.

The ending: I think, again, that your preconceived idea of the treatment of strong female characters influenced your initial belief that Mattie was punished. The men in this sorry could not have succeeded without Mattie’s resolve. She was not rescued in damsel fashion after the snake bite: Rooster felt her spirit was worthy of saving, indeed that it must be saved. In the ending scene, her posture, manner of dress, speech, and refusal to yield to a dirtbag all speak in very visual terms that she is independent and successful. Her success is implied from the beginning of the film, when she demonstrates from the start that even at 14, she is a formidable business person. Her statement that she never had time for love, etc. it’s really something of a joke, and intended to be mildly humorous, in her matter-of-fact way.

In the end, she’s not been punished, but vindicated. Her ironically-timed arrival to see Rooster, finding instead that he has died, is a nod to the injustices life beyond to us all. It’s how we handle those things that makes us who we are: Mattie accepts his death as a fact, files it away, shrugs it off as something she can’t control, turns, and moves on.